historic place
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Oh i really recommend Anapji.
Anapji is the palace built about 1000 year ago. and it is one of the most beatiful historic place in Korea.
In the past, the prince lived on Anapji. but you know the special thing about this place is built in the middle of lake.
so you know. it has so wonderful night view. so there are huge crowd of tourists at night.
but I think The unfortunate thing is that it is alway crowed so it is hard to capture only the scenery without any persons
in the picture.
nevertheless, honesty it is so beautyful that i really recommend visiting there. obviously Anapji is very worth visiting
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Good morning Mr. [이름] Woo!
I totally agree with you because I have looked for the photos and it\'s awesome!
I hope I could travel after the pandemic would be over.
Thanks for your answer :)
Oh i really recommend Anapji.
>>Oh, I really recommend Anapji.
Anapji is the palace built about 1000 year ago. and it is one of the most beatiful historic place in Korea.
>>Anapji is a palace built about 1,000 years ago and is one of the most beautiful historic sites in Korea.
In the past, the prince lived on Anapji.
>>In the past, the prince lived in Anapji.
but you know the special thing about this place is built in the middle of lake.
>>But what\'s special about this place is that it stands in the middle of the lake.
so you know. it has so wonderful night view. so there are huge crowd of tourists at night.
>>So you know, the night view is so great that many tourists come at night.
but I think The unfortunate thing is that it is alway crowed so it is hard to capture only the scenery without any persons
in the picture.
>>But unfortunately, it\'s always hard to capture the scenery because there are many people.
nevertheless, honesty it is so beautyful that i really recommend visiting there.
>>Nevertheless, it is so beautiful and I recommend visiting this place.
obviously Anapji is very worth visiting
>>It will be worth visiting Anapji.
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