Historical place Part 2 and 3
학생이 쓴 원문
Part2 Describe an interesting historic place
what it is
where it is located
what you can see there now
and explain why this place is interesting
Part3
How do people in your country feel about protecting historic building?
Do you think an area can benefit from having an interesting historic place locally? In what way?
What do you think will happen to historic places or buildings in the future? Why?
강사 첨삭
We already had the part2 last Friday and today. I expect a better answer next time.
Please prepare your answers. Make sure you understand the question before giving an answer.
T.Sheela
Part2 Describe an interesting historic place
What it is
>>What it is?where it is located
>>Where is it located?what you can see there now
>>What can you see there now?
or
>>What can be seen there?and explain why this place is interesting
>>And explain why this place is interesting.
Part3How do people in your country feel about protecting historic building?>>Correct!Do you think an area can benefit from having an interesting historic place locally? In what way?>>Correct!What do you think will happen to historic places or buildings in the future? Why?
>>Correct!
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