Hit the road & Hit the book...

2016-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Dear [Name], Me too! I love to talk with you always. I am very sure, you are very skilled to bring peoples motivation. I think, its one of your telent which you got from the God. And you have been bringing me the wonderful tips of studying which is really hard to do for me. And I think, if I do follow it correctly & properly, this English class should be finishied some months or years before. Therefore I will remember it but I do not follow the great tips from you... ;-) Means, I will hit the books by my hands.... Best Regards, [이름]

강사 첨삭

To our dearest CK: This is what I like! Oh no, I LOVE IT! Thank you very much for finding some time for this, CK. You sure know how to surprise me. I know that I keep on asking you to send me a composition but I wasn\'t expecting this. You did not even give me a hint that you would do it on the last day of our 27th set of classes. I owe you big time! Your words here are even quite flattering, I want to cry. How I wish you are not only pulling my leg. LOL Allow me to point out your humor in writing as well. You are simply amazing! You know how to play with words, too. Now I\'m thinking of not encouraging you to follow the tips for easier and faster mastery of English because I do not want you to stop speaking with me. But of course, that\'s not how it works. Besides, English is not a dead language, so it continuously evolves even without us using it. It is then important for us to keep using it as much as we can. Don\'t hit your books with your hands now, my friend. You are just going to hurt yourself. Hit the books with your eyes and tell me whatever you\'re going to learn from your readings during our class. How does this sound? I can sense that you are having second thoughts. LOL Come on, CK, you can do it! NO PRESSURE! Do it only whenever you can. Now, it\'s time for you to stop me. I am already writing too much. But I can\'t help it! I am even equally excited to speak with you again. I\'ll catch you next week, CK! Please wait for my call.For now, I\'ll bid you goodbye. Have a wonderful weekend with your family! Please send my regards to them. Thank you very much, CK. _Klein Dear [Name],Me too! I love to talk with you always. >>CorrectI am very sure, you are very skilled to bring peoples motivation. >>I am very sure you are very skilled at bringing people\'s motivation. >>I am quite sure you are very skilled at awakening people\'s motivation. >>I am quite sure that you are very skilled at giving people motivation.I think, its one of your telent which you got from the God.>>I think it\'s one of your talents, which you got from God.And you have been bringing me the wonderful tips of studying which is really hard to do for me. >>And, you have been bringing me the wonderful tips for studying, which are really hard for me to do. And I think, if I do follow it correctly & properly, this English class should be finishied some months or years before. >>And I think, if I do follow then correctly and properly, this English class would have been finished some months or years ago. Therefore I will remember it but I do not follow the great tips from you... ;-)>>Therefore, I will remember them but I won\'t follow the great tips from you.Means, I will hit the books by my hands....>>This means, I will hit the book with my hands.Best Regards,CK >>Correct

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