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Jean
Make a sentence using the words below:
1. convenient
2. common
3. bothers
4. bare
5. annoy
1. the more convenient technolgy makes our life,the harder some eldery people who can\'t handle these tecnological systems are
>> The more convenient technology makes our life, the harder life becomes to some elderly people who can\'t handle such systems.
2. it is common that most of koreans spend lots of money to improve their\' english skils.
>> It\'s very common among Koreans to spend a great amount of money to improve their English skills.
3. sometimes,everything bothers me like eating, studying and so on.
>> There are times that everything bothers me, such as eating, studying, and so on.
4. i prefer to go around with bare feet indoors.
>> I prefer to go around barefoot indoors.
5. i love my pet even though he can be annoying at times
>> I love my pet even though he can be annoying at times.
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