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Q. If the Korean government recommends other vaccines and not Pfizer, would you want to be vaccinated?
A. If the Korean government recommends other vaccines and not Pfizer, I might be hesitate to vaccinate. Because, other vaccines such as AZ is not safety compare to Pfizer. Side effects on the vaccine are reported especially AZ. However, If I live in Korea, I don\'t have other choices without AZ. Most of the vaccines secured by the Korean government are from AZ, and I think I ended up getting vaccinated.
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Q. If the Korean government recommends other vaccines and not Pfizer, would you want to be vaccinated?
A. If the Korean government recommends other vaccines and not Pfizer, I might be hesitate to vaccinate. Because, other vaccines such as AZ is not safety compare to Pfizer. Side effects on the vaccine are reported especially AZ. However, If I live in Korea, I don\'t have other choices without AZ. Most of the vaccines secured by the Korean government are from AZ, and I think I ended up getting vaccinated.
>> A. If the Korean government recommends other vaccines and not Pfizer, I
might hesitate to be vaccinated because, other vaccines such as AZ is
not safe compared to Pfizer. Side effects on the vaccine are reported
especially AZ. However, If I live in Korea, I don\'t have other choices
without AZ. Most of the vaccines that were secured by the Korean government are
from AZ and I think I ended up getting vaccinated.
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