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If I make my own supercomputer, I would like to predict the winning number of the lottery. My dream is to become a building owner and live on an unearned income. Of course, I will continue to work for self-realization even if I have enough unearned income, but I hope I have enough money for my life and mental comfort.
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If I make my own supercomputer, I would like to predict the winning number of the lottery.
>>> If I will make my own supercomputer, then I would like to create a supercomputer that would predict the winning number of the lottery.
My dream is to become a building owner and live on an unearned income.
>>> CORRECT
Of course, I will continue to work for self-realization even if I have enough unearned income, but I hope I have enough money for my life and mental comfort.
>>> CORRECT
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