Hmm...I don\'t know~ㅜㅜ

2021-04-05 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

학생이 쓴 원문

Actually I don\'t know...because I love Japan\'s culture, like cherry blossom, and [이름]ono, but I don\'t like Japan\'s personality. Although the teacher may know our history, we had been conquered by Japan during the Japanese colonial period. There was a time when our ancestors lived under such Japanese abuse and ridicule. People who don\'t know our pain yet haven\'t experienced this feeling, Japan? It\'s a good country~ You can think of this way, but to us, Japan can be seen as water and oil. It means that we can be together, but our hearts are separate. I can say I hate this much, but I can\'t say I hate it, because the natural environment in Japan is very beautiful. The picture is Mount Fuji in the autumn scenery of Japan.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Maria!

It is really a very difficult question to ask whether or not you can be truly friends with a country that hurt you so badly. Anyway, the past is finished and we can all move forward. Maybe there can be forgiveness in the future.

Thanks for writing this composition.

I will see you again in class.

-T. Donna =)

Actually I don\'t know...because I love Japan\'s culture, like cherry blossom, and [이름]ono, but I don\'t like Japan\'s personality. 
>> Actually I don\'t know because I love Japan\'s culture like cherry blossom and [이름]ono, but I don\'t like Japan\'s personality. 

Although the teacher may know our history, we had been conquered by Japan during the Japanese colonial period. 
>> Correct!

There was a time when our ancestors lived under such Japanese abuse and ridicule. 
>> Correct!

People who don\'t know our pain yet haven\'t experienced this feeling, Japan? It\'s a good country~ You can think of this way, but to us, Japan can be seen as water and oil. 
>> People who don\'t know our pain yet haven\'t experienced this feeling. Japan? It\'s a good country~ You can think of this way, but to us, Japan can be seen as water and oil. 

It means that we can be together, but our hearts are separate. 
>> It means that we can be together, but our hearts are separated. 

I can say I hate this much, but I can\'t say I hate it, because the natural environment in Japan is very beautiful. 
>> Correct!

The picture is Mount Fuji in the autumn scenery of Japan.
>> Correct!

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