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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~Jane~~
Are you having good day? When you read my home work, I would be flying to the sky to Saipan.
Don't skip your lunch and have a great day!
See you on Tuesday!!!
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
In not more than 10 sentences, write your thoughts about the following topic:
Is too much togetherness annoying?
- Yes, Too much togetherness is annoying me absolutely, even my husband and Nana. I like being alon sometimes as people do.
I don't like regular meeting like monthly meeting.therefore most of my friends complain that I don't show up the meeting.
Although I cry out love everyday, love also annoys me from time to time.
It's very difficult to control the time being togather or being alone.
We all concern how we divide our time without hearing complain from poeple who we love. don't we?
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for your composition today! I hope you\'ll have a safe trip to Saipan. Take care!
T. JanE ^^
Hi~Jane~~>> Correct
Are you having good day?
>> Are you having a good day?
When you read my homework, I would be flying to the sky to Saipan.>> Correct
Don\'t skip your lunch and have a great day! >> Correct
See you on Tuesday!!!>> Correct HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:In not more than 10 sentences, write your thoughts about the following topic:>> Correct
Is too much togetherness annoying? >> Correct
- Yes, Too much togetherness is annoying me absolutely, even my husband and Nana. >> Correct
I like being alone sometimes as people do. >> Correct
I don\'t like regular meeting like monthly meeting.
>> I don\'t like regular meetings like monthly meetings.
therefore most of my friends complain that I don\'t show up the meeting. >> Therefore, most of my friends complain that I don\'t show up in meetings.
Although I cry out love everyday, love also annoys me from time to time.>> Correct
It\'s very difficult to control the time being together or being alone.>> Correct
We all concern how we divide our time without hearing complain from poeple who we love. don\'t we?
>> We are all concern about how to divide our time without hearing complains from people we love, aren\'t we?
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