Hobbies reduce our stress and help us feel happy.
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Hi Da [이름],
You\'re onto something important! Hobbies truly have a magical way of easing stress and bringing joy. Keep up the good work, and remember, doing what you love is always a great way to stay happy and relaxed.
~Teacher Cathy
Actually, I don\'t know how hobbies make me happy and comfortable.
>>CORRECT
OR>> I don’t really understand how hobbies make me feel happy and relaxed.
I think the reason why I have a hobby is because my favorite thing is my hobby
>>I think I have hobbies because I enjoy doing them.
And it\'s because no one is stressed out doing what they like to do.
>>CORRECT
OR>>And it’s because people don’t feel stressed when they’re doing what they like.
At least, I think so.
>>CORRECT
OR>> At least, that’s what I think.
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