Hobby
학생이 쓴 원문
Hobby is to we to make you feel happy
강사 첨삭
Hey [이름] [이름]!
I love your message about hobbies! Hobbies are things we do that make us happy, like playing games, drawing pictures, or even playing with toys. What\'s your favorite hobby? Remember, doing things that make us happy is important.
You are very good at doing all your homework, and I am very proud of you. Keep up the great work and keep having lots of fun with your hobbies!
~Teacher Cathy
Hobby is to we to make you feel happy
>>We have hobbies to make us feel happy.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.