Hobby

I lost my one of hobby. I didn't realize that I almost forget. I have started that hobby since I was elementary student. It's collecting stemps. When I deciede to collect stemps, I crazied about old stemps. One of my cousin also the same as me. He had an effected me. At that time, He was high school student, he gave up his hooby and gave all his stemps to me. Collecting stemps is really difficult to young children. It needs lots of money to buy some kind of special stemps. Some special stemps has their date. If I fogot that day, I couldn't get any stemps. Those stemps printed limited quantity. Sometimes Those prices go on rising than I bought. When I don't have enough money, I sold them.I decided to start my old hobby. I think having some hobbies helps me on that point feel happy.

Hi [이름]!!! Here are the corrections that I made to your composition. Kindly check on them and keep on doing your hobby. I agree that it helps you to be happy and also it keeps away your stress. Lei J   I lost my one of hobby. >>I stopped doing one of my hobbies. I didn't realize that I almost forget. >>I didn't realize that I almost forgot about it. I have started that hobby since I was elementary student. >>I started doing that hobby when I was an elementary student. It's collecting stemps. >>I used to collect stamps. When I deciede to collect stemps, I crazied about old stemps. >>I got crazy about old stamps when I started collecting them. One of my cousin also the same as me. >>One of my cousins also have the same hobby.1 He had an effected me. >>correct At that time, He was high school student, he gave up his hooby and gave all his stemps to me. >>He was a high school student that time and when he gave up on his hobby he gave his stamps to me. Collecting stamps is really difficult to young children. >>correct It needs lots of money to buy some kind of special stemps. >>It requires a lot of money to buy the special kind of stamps. Some special stemps has their date. >>Some of the special stamps have their dates on. If I fogot that day, I couldn't get any stemps. >>I forgot the day I couldn't get any stamps. Those stemps printed limited quantity. >>Those stamps which were printed in limited quantity. Sometimes Those prices go on rising than I bought. >>Sometimes the prices keep on rising as I buy them. When I don't have enough money, I sold them. >>When I didn't have enough money, I sold them. I decided to start my old hobby. >>I decided to do my old hobby again. I think having some hobbies helps me on that point feel happy. >>I think having a hobby helps me to be happy.