Hobby

2019-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 Debbie

학생이 쓴 원문

My hobby is riding MTB(mountain bike). I usually go riding it twice a week. Mostly I enjoy riding on the bike- road of HAN riverside. In spring season wind brushing softly against on riding is similar to lovers whisper. Sometimes I go mountain trail for bike-riding. Everytimes mountain riding makes me strong, feels a sense of accomplishment It makes me refresed and leads me to active daily life. I recomand riding a bike as a hobby to especially to elderly people.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for answering this, Jacob. By the way, I would like to recommend some songs that you could listen to.

These are just some of the most popular songs of all time. Hope you\'ll enjoy! ^^

Can\'t Take My Eyes Off You - Frankie Valli

Oh, Pretty Woman - Roy Orbison

I Want It That Way - Backstreet Boys

Bubbly - Colbie Caillat

Hey There Delilah - Plain White T\'s

- Teacher Debbie

My hobby is riding MTB(mountain bike).

>> correct

I usually go riding it twice a week.

>> I usually go riding for about twice a week.
Mostly I enjoy riding on the bike- road of HAN riverside.

>> Mostly, I enjoy biking along the Han river.

In spring season wind brushing softly against on riding is similar to lovers whisper.

>> In spring season, the soft brush of wind is similar to a lover\'s whisper.
Sometimes I go mountain trail for bike-riding.

>> Sometimes, I go to a mountain trail to bike.

Everytimes mountain riding makes me strong, feels a sense of accomplishment

>> Mountain riding makes me strong every time.

>> It makes me feel a sense of accomplishment.
It makes me refresed and leads me to active daily life.

>> It makes me refreshed and leads me to have an active life.

I recomand riding a bike as a hobby to especially to elderly people.

>> I recommend riding a bike as a hobby especially to elderly people.

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