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Good job making your homework.

3. I watch movies or dramas for an hour on a weekday and on weekends I watch these for about 2 hours.

>> Correct.

I usually watch these at night before sleeping. I consider this time really important, because I can often reduce my stress.

>> I usually watch these at night before sleeping. I consider this time really important because I can often reduce the stress I feel.

 4. Yes. It’s because I think doing what they want and enjoy helps people to refresh their mind.

>> Yes. It’s because I think doing what they want and what they enjoy helps people to refresh their mind. 

Also, surfing the Internet and listening to music can be interesting things and I often do and it makes my emotion better.

>> Also, surfing the internet and listening to music can be interesting things. I often do it because it makes my emotions better.

 5. It depends on kinds of things.

>> Correct.

When it comes to surf the Internet, it will cost too much time because I would look for beautiful clothes or shoes.

>> When it comes to surfing the internet, it will cost too much time because I would look for beautiful clothes or shoes.

However, in case of listening to music I can listen when I go somewhere or when I study.

>> However, in the case of listening to music, I can listen wherever I go and whatever I am doing.

So it doesn’t require extra time.

>> Correct.

 6. I don’t like hobbies that require teamwork.

>> Correct.

It’s because I think hobbies are the time that I can relieve my stress and I can enjoy.

>> It’s because I think hobbies are times where we can relieve our stress and where we can enjoy.

If they require teamwork, a problem can be happen because of differences.

>> If they require teamwork, a problem can happen because of differences.