Hobby that i want to try
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a few years ago, some friends and I took pictures and videos to make UCC for a prize.
>> Some of my friends and I took pictures and videos for a UCC for a prize a few years ago.
I was very interested in making and editing video at that time. As growing up, I didn\'t have time to make video and I can\'t afford buying laptop.
>> I was very interested in making and editing videos at that time. Growing up, I didn\'t have time to make videos and I can\'t afford buying a laptop.
But these days, I used program for making a short video once in a while.
>> But these days, I used a program to make short videos once in a while.
I feel like I\'m interested in that to this day.
>> I feel like I\'m interested in that up to this day.
So if I have time, I really want to learn how to use editing tools and get used to it.
>> I really want to learn how to use editing programs and get used to it. If I have time.
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