Hoe are you, Mayleen!
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강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! ^-^
Happy Tuesday!
This is a very interesting composition.
It\'s informative, too. ^.^ Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.
You like to read history books that\'s why you know a lot about world history.
I can\'t wait to talk to you again tomorrow. See you then!
_T. Mayleen :)
Italy reminds me of culture and civilization and it was the center of all of the world in the Roman Empire.
>> Italy reminds me of Roman culture and civilization when its empire was the center of the world.
Italy was divided with many city states in the Middle Ages, so they was invaded by powerful neighboring countries such as Spain, France, the Holy Roman Empire.
>> Italy was divided into many city states during the Middle Age and because of that they were invaded by powerful neighboring countries such as Spain, France, and the Roman Empire.
This place was the birthplace of the Renaissance that is the dawn of modern civilization.
>> This place was the birthplace of the Renaissance which is the start of modern civilization.
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