Hoe are you, Mayleen!

2017-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 Luna

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Creative Writing: What would you do if you knew aliens would attack Earth tomorrow?Answer in not more than five (5) sentences. If aliens would attack Earth, I think aliens definitely are more civilized than earth. Therefore, I want to held a party with my family at first, because it may be a last dinner . Secondly, I hope to greet an acquaintance and relatives saying good bye Lastly, I pray for maintaining earth stability, after that, I wait and see our political leaders how to cope with.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Mr. [Name]!^-^

Happy Monday!


Thank you for answering your homework.

I\'ve read it well. I might do the same thing.^^

If it\'ll be the dinner I\'ll have with my family them I\'ll make sure it\'ll be memorable.

See you again on Wednesday!^^


_T. Mayleen :)


If aliens would attack Earth, I think aliens definitely are more civilized than earth.

>> If aliens would attack Earth, I think they\'d be more civilized than people here on Earth.

Therefore, I want to held a party with my family at first, because it may be a last dinner .

>> First, I would hold a party with my family because it may be my last dinner.

Secondly, I hope to greet an acquaintance and relatives saying good bye

>> Second, I would say good bye to my relatives and acquaintances.

Lastly, I pray for maintaining earth stability, after that, I wait and see our political leaders how to cope with.

>> Last, I\'d pray for the Earth\'s stability. After that, I\'d like to see how political leaders cope with the situation.

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