Hoe are you, Mayleen!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Mr. [Name]!^-^
Happy Monday!
Thank you for answering your homework.
I\'ve read it well. I might do the same thing.^^
If it\'ll be the dinner I\'ll have with my family them I\'ll make sure it\'ll be memorable.
See you again on Wednesday!^^
_T. Mayleen :)
If aliens would attack Earth, I think aliens definitely are more civilized than earth.
>> If aliens would attack Earth, I think they\'d be more civilized than people here on Earth.
Therefore, I want to held a party with my family at first, because it may be a last dinner .
>> First, I would hold a party with my family because it may be my last dinner.
Secondly, I hope to greet an acquaintance and relatives saying good bye
>> Second, I would say good bye to my relatives and acquaintances.
Lastly, I pray for maintaining earth stability, after that, I wait and see our political leaders how to cope with.
>> Last, I\'d pray for the Earth\'s stability. After that, I\'d like to see how political leaders cope with the situation.
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