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2013-11-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Oh~ Jane~ I don't understand today's homework. I feel that I am fool. I knew again that I am poor at grammer.ㅠ.ㅠ Have a great Day! HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: *Theme/Title: Complete sentence or a fragment * Description/Instructions A complete sentence must have both a subject and a verb and be an independent clause. Something must be done by something or someone. Identify each as either a complete sentence or a fragment. 1. Alex and Marcus are excited about watching the Olympics. - Alex and Marcus are watching the Olympics and they are exited. 2. Because she didn't do her homework. - Because she didn't do her homework, she scolded by her teacher. 3. When he's finished with that. - When he's finished with that, he goes to bed with relief. 4. After he cleans his room, Carlos can go to the game. - Carlos can go to the game, after he cleans his room. 5. While watching the Olympics on TV. - He got a heart attack while watching the Olympics on TV.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition! Cheer up! This homework is quite tricky. The answer required is either sentence or fragment. Anyway, here are the corrections. Take care and stay enthusiastic! T. JanE ^^ Oh~ Jane~ I don\'t understand today\'s homework. >> Correct I feel that I am fool.>> I feel that I am a fool. I knew again that I am poor at grammar.ㅠ.ㅠ>> Correct Have a great day! >> Correct HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:*Theme/Title: Complete sentence or a fragment* Description/Instructions A complete sentence must have both a subject and a verb and be an independent clause. Something must be done by something or someone. Identify each as either a complete sentence or a fragment.1. Alex and Marcus are excited about watching the Olympics.- Alex and Marcus are watching the Olympics and they are exited.>> The answer is sentence. 2. Because she didn\'t do her homework.- Because she didn\'t do her homework, she scolded by her teacher.>> The answer is fragment. 3. When he\'s finished with that.- When he\'s finished with that, he goes to bed with relief.>> The answer is fragment. 4. After he cleans his room, Carlos can go to the game.- Carlos can go to the game, after he cleans his room.>> The answer is sentence. 5. While watching the Olympics on TV.- He got a heart attack while watching the Olympics on TV. >> The answer is fragment.  

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