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강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
I apologize. I think I didn\'t write it clearly. It was just a joke. Hahaha.
It is something that some students do when I was in university.
Anyway, thanks for sharing a superstitious belief in Korea.
Well, I think it was just a coincidence.
Because in Manila, Philippines, I think there are a lot of people who turn on their fans when they are sleeping.^_^
But then, that is their belief so I respect that.
Let\'s talk again tomorrow! See you!
~T. Jessie~
Hi again!
>> Correct!
I think that you\'re misunderstanding about the main homework.
>> I think that you misunderstood the main homework.
The essay of a story about a famous Korean which you said is for today\'s homework not yesterday\'s.
>> Correct!
Check it again and you\'ll find your mistake. :D
Now I\'m trying not to sleep during the day time.
>> Correct!
I\'ve got to sleep on time today to change my sleeping habit.
>> Correct!
I hope that I can be awake during the left time.
>> I hope that I can stay awake for the remaining time.
See ya~
>> Correct!
<Essay>
This is a superstition of Korea.
>> This is a superstition in Korea.
If we turn on a fan when we\'re sleeping, we could be die for some reasons.
>> If we turn on a fan when we\'re sleeping, we could die for some reasons.
OR>> If we turn on a fan when we\'re sleeping, we could die for unknown reasons.
There\'s no scientific evidence but it did really happened before in Korea.
>> There\'s no scientific evidence but it did really happen in Korea before.Scientists couldn\'t haven found out why it happens yet.
>> Scientists couldn\'t find out why it happened.
OR>> Scientists haven\'t found out how it happened.
So it was quite famous although it is getting faded out.
>> So it was quite famous although it is fading out.
I do not believe it of course. :)
>> Correct!
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