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On February in Korea, most people have to pay additional taxes or they can get additional taxes.
It is called salary of thirteenth month in Korea.
So I want to get additional taxes on February, I don't want to pay additional taxes.
If I can get additional taxes, I want to buy a beautiful clothes.
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Hi [이름]! ^^
How are you! ^^ Everbody likes thirteenth month pay, right?
Well, it\'s because you will recieve a big amount of money. :)
I know that you like fashion so much because you like buying
beautiful clothes. :)
Anyway, I hope that you will receive your thirteenth month pay this February. :)
Take care [이름]!
See you!
~~Teacher Kris
On February in Korea, most people have to pay additional taxes or they can get additional taxes.
>> On February in Korea, most people have to pay additional taxes or they can get free taxes.It is called salary of thirteenth month in Korea.
>> It is called thirteenth month pay in Korea.So I want to get additional taxes on February, I don\'t want to pay additional taxes.
>> So, I want to have free taxes on February and I don\'t want to pay additional taxes.If I can get additional taxes, I want to buy a beautiful clothes. >> If I have free taxes, I will buy beautiful clothes.
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