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2015-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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On February in Korea, most people have to pay additional taxes or they can get additional taxes. It is called salary of thirteenth month in Korea. So I want to get additional taxes on February, I don't want to pay additional taxes. If I can get additional taxes, I want to buy a beautiful clothes.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ How are you! ^^ Everbody likes thirteenth month pay, right? Well, it\'s because you will recieve a big amount of money. :) I  know that you like fashion so much because you like buying beautiful clothes. :) Anyway, I hope that you will receive your thirteenth month pay this February. :) Take care [이름]! See you!   ~~Teacher Kris   On February in Korea, most people have to pay additional taxes or they can get additional taxes. >> On February in Korea, most people have to pay additional taxes or they can get free taxes.It is called salary of thirteenth month in Korea. >> It is called thirteenth month pay in Korea.So I want to get additional taxes on February, I don\'t want to pay additional taxes. >> So, I want to have free taxes on February and I don\'t want to pay additional taxes.If I can get additional taxes, I want to buy a beautiful clothes. >> If I have free taxes, I will buy beautiful clothes.  

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