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Give me your opinion about cosmetic surgery. Some people have to choose cosmetic surgery for themself. For example, accident, scratch, etc. Some people choose for their beauty. I understand them because all people want beauty. But, we have to be careful about plastic surgery side effect. Before we choose cosmetic surgery, we have to think a long time and we have to decide it.

Hi [이름]! ^^ How are you today? Thank you for sharing your opinion about the topic. I read your homework and I totally agree with it. Cosmetic surgery is good but there is also a bad effect so we have to be careful. We must be satisfied about our natural looks. If we aim for beauty then we have to eat healthy diet and exercise a lot. We should also take good care of ourselves. In fact, we are all beautiful. Nobody is ugly, right? So, [이름], don\'t go under surgery. kk Take care ans see you! ^^   ~~Teacher Kris   Some people have to choose cosmetic surgery for themself. >> CorrectFor example, accident, scratch, etc. >> CorrectSome people choose for their beauty. >> Some people choose to be beautiful.I understand them because all people want beauty. >> I understans them because all of the people want beauty.But, we have to be careful about plastic surgery side effect. >> But, we have to be careful about the bad effect oof plastic surgery, Before we choose cosmetic surgery, we have to think a long time and we have to decide it. >> Before we choose cosmetic surgery, we have to think for a long time and we have to make a wise decision.