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When I am gone, I hope that I remember to them for a long time.
Many people are living in the world.
So I don't want much things. I just remember to them for a long time.
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Hi Ms. [이름]!
Happy Wednesday!
Thank you for making your homework. Have a good day at work.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
When I am gone, I hope that I remember to them for a long time.
>> When I am gone, I hope that I will be remembered for a long time.
Many people are living in the world.
>>correct!
So I don\'t want much things. I just remember to them for a long time.
>>So I don\'t want many things just for them to remember me for a long time.
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