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I don't like meeting new people because I'm not very sociable person. I think it is too tiring to try making good first impression. I don't want to try to guess what a person thinks of me. Another reason why I don't like meeting new people is because I don't like to hear chatting and all the noises.
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I don\'t like meeting new people because I\'m not very sociable person.
>> I don\'t like meeting new people because I\'m not a very sociable person.
I think it is too tiring to try making good first impression.
>> I think it\'s too tiring to try making a good first impression.
I don\'t want to try to guess what a person thinks of me.
>> CORRECT
Another reason why I don\'t like meeting new people is because I don\'t like to hear chatting and all the noises.
>> CORRECT
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