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Happy Friday, [이름]! Oh my, If I was put in your situation, I don\'t think I\'ll survive. But it\'s a good thing your company was able to fix this issue. You never fail to amaze me with your answers. Keep it up! ~Teacher Elisha

 I was really stressful last month because there was a financial issue in GM korea.

>>  I was very stressed last month because there was a financial issue in GM Korea.

So, GM CEO mentioned that GMK could be bankrupt if there was no effort to reduce cost including retirement of employees.

>> The CEO of GM Korea mentioned that GMK might go bankrupt if we do not reduce our expenses including the retirement of employees.

One of GM korea\'s plant,Gunsan plant was shut down.

>> One of GM Korea\'s plant in Gunsan was shut down.

So, more than 1000 people lost their Job.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> As a result, more than 1000 people lost their Job.

As a member of company, I was dispointed to GM and depressed for a while.

>> As an employee of GM Korea, I was disappointed and I was depressed for a while.

 However, we solved this issue after get the korea goverment support.

>> However, we were able to solve this issue after the Korean government gave their support.