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Hi Irene!
It's raning out side.
Ater this rain, it will be colder than now. It means to us winter is right in front of us and Christmas is coming.
Altough I am not a christian but I like christmas holidays and celebrating X-mas.
Any way. I hope you can have a holiday on 24th.
Have a nice day!
ESSAY : Do you think Korean colleges/universities are effective (or even necessary) in preparing students for professional careers? Explain.
I think that It depends on what carrer is.
For example. you should go to a university or a college to study some majors such like a science course or a medical course. Those major must be very difficult, even more almost impossible to study alon.
Iam sure that students need to professors for professinal careers.
On the other hand, to be a Chef, a singer, a fashion designer such like atrs course, students may can practice and study by themselves. Because those courses need more gifted talents and efforts than learning from proffessors.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]! I heard it\'s drizzling in some parts of Korea. I didn\'t think you place is one ofe those affected by the rain. ^_^ I guess that is brought about by the cooling temperature in the atmosphere. Take care now. Don\'t get wet. We don\'t want you getting sick now, don\'t we? ^_^
~T. Irene
Hi Irene!
It\'s raining out side.
>>> Correct.
Ater this rain, it will be colder than now.
>>> After this rain, it will get colder.
It means to us winter is right in front of us and Christmas is coming.
>>> For us, it means winter is here and Christmas is coming.
Altough I am not a christian but I like christmas holidays and celebrating X-mas.
>>> Although, I am not a Christian, I still like celebrating the Christmas holiday.
Any way. I hope you can have a holiday on 24th.
>>> Anyway, I hope you can have a holiday on the 24th.
Have a nice day!
>>> Correct.
ESSAY : Do you think Korean colleges/universities are effective (or even necessary) in preparing students for professional careers? Explain.
I think that It depends on what carrer is.
>>> I think that depends on the type of career one will have.
For example, you should go to a university or a college to study some majors such like a science course or a medical course.
>>> For example, you can study a science or medical course in a university or college.
Those major must be very difficult, even more almost impossible to study alon.
>>> Those majors must be very difficult, almost impossible to be studied alone.
I am sure that students need to professors for professinal careers.
>>> I am sure that students need good professors for those academic careers.
On the other hand, to be a Chef, a singer, a fashion designer such like atrs course, students may can practice and study by themselves.
>>> On the other hand, to be a chef, a singer, a fashion designer or any art course, students may study by themselves.
Because those courses need more gifted talents and efforts than learning from proffessors.
>>> That is because those courses requires one\'s innate talent rather than being taught by a professor.
~T. Irene
Hi Irene!
It\'s raining out side.
>>> Correct.
Ater this rain, it will be colder than now.
>>> After this rain, it will get colder.
It means to us winter is right in front of us and Christmas is coming.
>>> For us, it means winter is here and Christmas is coming.
Altough I am not a christian but I like christmas holidays and celebrating X-mas.
>>> Although, I am not a Christian, I still like celebrating the Christmas holiday.
Any way. I hope you can have a holiday on 24th.
>>> Anyway, I hope you can have a holiday on the 24th.
Have a nice day!
>>> Correct.
ESSAY : Do you think Korean colleges/universities are effective (or even necessary) in preparing students for professional careers? Explain.
I think that It depends on what carrer is.
>>> I think that depends on the type of career one will have.
For example, you should go to a university or a college to study some majors such like a science course or a medical course.
>>> For example, you can study a science or medical course in a university or college.
Those major must be very difficult, even more almost impossible to study alon.
>>> Those majors must be very difficult, almost impossible to be studied alone.
I am sure that students need to professors for professinal careers.
>>> I am sure that students need good professors for those academic careers.
On the other hand, to be a Chef, a singer, a fashion designer such like atrs course, students may can practice and study by themselves.
>>> On the other hand, to be a chef, a singer, a fashion designer or any art course, students may study by themselves.
Because those courses need more gifted talents and efforts than learning from proffessors.
>>> That is because those courses requires one\'s innate talent rather than being taught by a professor.
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