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Essay Question:
How is social media changing parent and child relationships?
Social media provides advantages and disadvantages to the relationship between family and children.
The advantage is that parents and their children communicate more actively.
The disadvantage is that excessive parental interference can worsen relationships.
Social media has already become our daily lives.
Therefore we need to make good ues of social media and utilize the advantages.
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Social media provides advantages and disadvantages to the relationship between family and children.
>> correct
The advantage is that parents and their children communicate more actively.
The advantage is that parents and their children communicate more actively.
>> correct
The disadvantage is that excessive parental interference can worsen relationships.
The disadvantage is that excessive parental interference can worsen relationships.
>> correct
Social media has already become our daily lives.
Social media has already become our daily lives.
>> Social media has already become part of our daily lives.
Therefore. we need to make good use of social media and utilize the advantages.
Therefore. we need to make good use of social media and utilize the advantages.
>> correct
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