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2019-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Gracelyn

학생이 쓴 원문

Essay Question: Describe your favorite teacher. Why do you like him/he I like the professor in charge of colleage. He was the mentor of my first life. He taught me how to solve the problem. He also taught me how to live my life. I still keep in touch with him often. He always treats people with a sincere heart. That\'s why i like him.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Mr. [Name]. It\'s Monday again! I hope you will be able to start the day right.
Anyway, thank you very much for doing your homework.
I appreciate the effort.
Keep it up!
See you later! ^^

I like the professor in charge of colleage.
>> I like my professor in college.
He was the mentor of my first life.
>> He was my first mentor.
>> He was the first mentor that came to my life.
He taught me how to solve the problem.
>> correct
He also taught me how to live my life.
>> correct
I still keep in touch with him often.
>> correct
He always treats people with a sincere heart.
>> correct
That\'s why I like him.
>> correct

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