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What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city?
he advantages of city life
First, the public facilities of schools and hospitals are nearby, so they are easily available.
Second, it has the advantage of being close to a transportation facility that can go elsewhere.
the disadvantages of city life
First, the environment of water, air, etc. is not good for health.
Second, you can live a lonely life because you don\'t have much communication with your neighbors.
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The advantages of city life.
First, the public facilities of schools and hospitals are nearby, so they are easily available.
First, the public facilities of schools and hospitals are nearby, so they are easily available.
>> correct
>> Schools and hospitals are near so they are very accessible.
Second, it has the advantage of being close to a transportation facility that can go elsewhere.
Second, it has the advantage of being close to a transportation facility that can go elsewhere.
>> Second, it is close to transportation facilities than can go elsewhere.
The disadvantages of city life.
First, the environment of water, air, etc. is not good for health.
The disadvantages of city life.
First, the environment of water, air, etc. is not good for health.
>>First, the condition of water, air, etc is not good for the health.
Second, you can live a lonely life because you don\'t have much communication with your neighbors.
Second, you can live a lonely life because you don\'t have much communication with your neighbors.
>> correct
>> Second, you can live a lonely life because you don\'t communicate with your neighbors.
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