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2019-06-11 · 첨삭 강사 Gracelyn

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Essay Question: What is your favorite movie/book character? Describe him/her as detailed as you can. The character of the movie I watched impressively is Ms. [Name], \"Dead Poets Society, 1989\" If you write down the plot briefly, Freshmen enter the Wellton Academy, which follows \"traditional, honorable, disciplined and supreme.\" They lead a solemn and restrained school life. But their lives began to change after they met their new teacher, John Keating. Mr. [Name]\'s new teaching style has revolutionized closed thinking. The reason I like this character is Mr. [Name], who teaches us that life should not live solely for success, was charming. I want to be a good mentor to others like Mr. [Name].

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [Name]. Good morning. Thank you very much.

I will see you later.

T. Gracelyn

The character of the movie I watched impressively is Ms. [Name], \"Dead Poets Society, 1989\"

>> My favorite movie character is Ms. [Name] of \'Dead Poets Society, 1989\'.
If you write down the plot briefly, Freshmen enter the Wellton Academy, which follows \"traditional, honorable, disciplined and supreme.\"

>> correct
They lead a solemn and restrained school life.

>> correct
But their lives began to change after they met their new teacher, John Keating.
>> correct
Mr. [Name]\'s new teaching style has revolutionized closed thinking.

>> correct
The reason I like this character is, Mr. [Name], who teaches us that life should not live solely for success, was charming.

>> The reason I like this character is that Mr. [Name] teaches us that we should not only live for success.

I want to be a good mentor to others like Mr. [Name].

>> correct

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