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Essay Question:
How do movies or television influence people\'s behavior?
Television makes it easy to watch movies or plays at home.
It also allows students to study various subjects such as math and science at home.
As such, there are advantages and disadvantages.
You can do bad things by imitating the scenes on television.
It also lack time to talk to family or people around them.
Carefully control the amount of time devoted to \'television\'.
This way, \'television\' will benefit your life.
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Hello Mr. [Name]. Good morning. Thank you very much.
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It also allows students to study various subjects such as math and science at home.
It also allows students to study various subjects such as math and science at home.
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As such, there are advantages and disadvantages.
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You can do bad things by imitating the scenes on television.
As such, there are advantages and disadvantages.
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You can do bad things by imitating the scenes on television.
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It also lack time to talk to family or people around them.
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Carefully control the amount of time devoted to \'television\'.
It also lack time to talk to family or people around them.
>> correct
Carefully control the amount of time devoted to \'television\'.
>> correct
This way, \'television\' will benefit your life.
This way, \'television\' will benefit your life.
>> This way, television will be a benefit in your life.
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