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Essay Question:
Is there a movie you could watch over and over again?
The movie that I want to see again is The shawshank redemption.
The story of this movie is as follows.
The main character, Andy Dufrain, is on a roll as a banker.
Then, he is accused of murdering his wife and is imprisoned.
It\'s a place where he can\'t do anything in prison and don\'t want to do anything,
but he live to find meaning and achieve his goals hard.
​The gentle running story doesn\'t have many scenes with special effects,
but it has the power to immerse itself into the end of the movie.
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The movie that I want to see again is \'The Shawshank Redemption\'.
>>correct
The story of this movie is as follows:
The story of this movie is as follows:
>>correct
The main character, Andy Dufrain, is on a roll as a banker.
The main character, Andy Dufrain, is on a roll as a banker.
>> The main character, Andy Dufrain, is a banker.
Then, he is accused of murdering his wife and is imprisoned.
Then, he is accused of murdering his wife and is imprisoned.
>>correct
It\'s a place where he can\'t do anything in prison and don\'t want to do anything.
It\'s a place where he can\'t do anything in prison and don\'t want to do anything.
>> He can\'t do anything in prison and he doesn\'t want to do anything.
but he live to find meaning and achieve his goals hard.
but he live to find meaning and achieve his goals hard.
>> But he continued to live too find the meaning and achieve his goals.
The gentle running story doesn\'t have many scenes with special effects
The gentle running story doesn\'t have many scenes with special effects
>>correct
but it has the power to immerse itself into the end of the movie.
but it has the power to immerse itself into the end of the movie.
>> But the ending was wonderful.
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