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Essay Question:
Describe your most memorable holiday or vacation spot in as much detail as possible.
Last March, I went to the DMZ in Paju with my family.
The DMZ is a demilitarized zone.
The DMZ prohibits the stationing of troops, the deployment of weapons and the installation of military facilities.
Under South Korea\'s armistice agreement, a two-kilometer zone each south and north of the border is designated as the Demilitarized Zone.
The DMZ is so close that it can see North Korean villages and citizens.
Although it is a bit tense in the DMZ, it is a place where people feel expectations for reunification.
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>> Last March, I went to DMZ in Paju with my family.
The DMZ is a demilitarized zone.
The DMZ is a demilitarized zone.
>> DMZ is a demilitarized zone.
DMZ prohibits the stationing of troops, the deployment of weapons and the installation of military facilities.
DMZ prohibits the stationing of troops, the deployment of weapons and the installation of military facilities.
>> correct
Under South Korea\'s armistice agreement, a two-kilometer zone each south and north of the border is designated as the Demilitarized Zone.
Under South Korea\'s armistice agreement, a two-kilometer zone each south and north of the border is designated as the Demilitarized Zone.
>> correct
The DMZ is so close that it can see North Korean villages and citizens.
The DMZ is so close that it can see North Korean villages and citizens.
>> correct
Although it is a bit tense in the DMZ, it is a place where people feel expectations for reunification.
Although it is a bit tense in the DMZ, it is a place where people feel expectations for reunification.
>> correct
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