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Essay Question:
How do movies or television influence people\'s behavior?
Movies sometimes show virtual reality.
This virtual reality provides people with advantages and disadvantages.
Advantages allow us to experience virtual space and time.
A disadvantage causes a crime that imitates bad behavior.
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Movies sometimes show virtual reality.
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This virtual reality provides people with advantages and disadvantages.
>> correct
Advantages allow us to experience virtual space and time.
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A disadvantage causes a crime that imitates bad behavior.
This virtual reality provides people with advantages and disadvantages.
>> correct
Advantages allow us to experience virtual space and time.
>> correct
A disadvantage causes a crime that imitates bad behavior.
>> correct
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