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Essay Question:
What is the major social problem in your country right now?
The problem of our society is that of Japan.
Japan excluded our country from the white country.
A white country is an export permit by Japan without inspection.
We import a lot of parts from our country\'s core industries from Japan.
This makes our industry difficult.
Japan should return to the country of free-exporting countries.
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>>correct
Japan excluded our country from the white country.
Japan excluded our country from the white country.
>>correct
A white country is an export permit by Japan without inspection.
A white country is an export permit by Japan without inspection.
>>Japan gives permission for exporting products from other countries.
We import a lot of parts from our country\'s core industries from Japan.
We import a lot of parts from our country\'s core industries from Japan.
>>We import a lot of products from Japan.
This makes our industry difficult.
This makes our industry difficult.
>>correct
Japan should return to the country of free-exporting countries.
>>Japan should return the free trade policy.
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