Hoesik
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was a superviser in Education board, I hate mandatory Hoesik culture.
My schedule, my will and my preferences were not importanr factors at Hoesik.
Of course I didn\'t lose my job thanks to a public servant even though I didn\'t go there.
But the upper class could hate me.
Fortunately The Hoesil culture is changing many parts since Corona in Korea.
Once the chance of Hoesik was gone.
I think that mandatory Hoesik doesn\'t make familar with each other.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]! Thank you for sharing this experience. I truly appreciate this because I could understand more about Korean cultures. Take care!
Aki~
When I was a superviser in Education board, I hate mandatory Hoesik culture.
>>> When I was a upervisor in Education Board, I hate the mandatory Hoesik culture.
My schedule, my will, and my preferences were not importanr factors at Hoesik.
>>> My schedule, my will, and my preferences were not important factors at Hoesik.
Of course I didn\'t lose my job thanks to a public servant even though I didn\'t go there.
>>> Of course, I can\'t lose my job thanks for being a public servant even though I didn\'t go there.
But the upper class could hate me.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> But the upper class would hate me.
Fortunately The Hoesil culture is changing many parts since Corona in Korea.
>>> Fortunately, The Hoesil culture is changing due to the Corona pandemic.
Once the chance of Hoesik was gone.
>>> Hoesik has been gone for a while
I think that mandatory Hoesik doesn\'t make familar with each other.
>>> I think that mandatory Hoesik doesn\'t make people familiar o each other.
>>> I think that mandatory Hoesik doesn\'t create camaraderie.
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