hoesik
학생이 쓴 원문
Even me, I didn\'t like communal iunches with teammates when I had worked as a supervisor at educatioanal office.
I don\'t agree that \'hoesik\' can make a good culture of organizations.
I don\'t do hoesik with my teathers for 3 years. But nobody complains about that.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]!
As an employee, one of the most uncomfortable situations for me is eating with my boss, One of the best ways to know someone is to go and have lunch or dinner with your subordinates. I guess most employers are doing that nowadays.
Have a good day!
Aki~
Even me, I didn\'t like communal iunches with teammates when I had worked as a supervisor at educatioanal office.
>>> Even I, didn\'t like communal lunches with teammates when I worked as a supervisor at an educational office.
I don\'t agree that \'hoesik\' can make a good culture of organizations.
>>> CORRECT!
I don\'t do hoesik with my teachers for 3 years. But nobody complains about that.
>>> CORRECT!
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