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2020-10-12 · 첨삭 강사 Oneil

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Um.... I can\'t remember that weidest thing I did. Because my moto is \'Don\'t regret what I did.\' Of course not all my choices were right. But, now I can\'t remember. so I will change the subject \'The best thing I\'ve ever done.\' that is writing a diary. I start writing diary since the beginning of this year. Now I can my past and I feel proud to know that I have lived hard.

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That is very good [이름]! ^_^

I can\'t remember that weidest thing I did. 
>> I can\'t remember the weirdest thing I did. 

Because my moto is \'Don\'t regret what I did.\' 
>> It is because my motto is, \"Don\'t regret what you did.\"

Of course not all my choices were right.
>> Correct.

But, now I can\'t remember. so I will change the subject \'The best thing I\'ve ever done.\' that is writing a diary. 
>> But, now I can\'t remember what I did. So, I will change the subject, \'The best thing I\'ve ever done.\' is what I am writing in my diary.

I start writing diary since the beginning of this year. 
>> I started writing my diary since the beginning of this year. 

Now I can my past and I feel proud to know that I have lived hard.
>> Now, I know may know how my past was and I feel proud to know that I have lived hard.

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