Hold a meeting
학생이 쓴 원문
(I am a moderator for a meeting. and i have to introduce a presenter who is very important person in our project. our team have to learn a latest technology from him.
I will introduce him now.
I will write a article to introduce him to everyone before starting his presentation.
Please correct grammer slips and suggest more good expression in this situation.
)
hello everyone.
Today I will introduce him who is a senior software engineer in the business unit achitectur team from London site of our company. he is a specialist of building software achitecture complying with ISO26262. and He has been working for so many ISO26262 project since 2007. this seminar is a big chance to learn about the ISO26262 technology and I am sure that it helps to proceed our future project.
Let me introduce Mr. [Name].
Mr. [Name], please come to in front of the desk....(Please come to here near the mic.)...
강사 첨삭
Hello HyundSuk! Always remember to capitalize the first letter in a sentence. You can also add the other accomlishments of your speaker aside from being a se\\pecialist in his feild.
I am a moderator for a meeting. and i have to introduce a presenter who is very important person in our project.
>> I am a moderator in a meeting and I have to introduce a presenter who is very important in our project.
our team have to learn a latest technology from him.
>> Our team has to learn the latest technology from him.
I will introduce him now.
>> Correct
>> OR: I am going to intoduce him now.I will write a article to introduce him to everyone before starting his presentation.
>> I will write an article to introduce him to everyone before starting with his presentation.
hello everyone.
>> Hello, everyone!
Today I will introduce him who is a senior software engineer in the business unit achitectur team from London site of our company.
>> Today, I will introduce our speker who is a senior software engineer in the business unit architechture team from London.
he is a specialist of building software achitecture complying with ISO26262. and
>> He is a specialist in building software architechture complying with ISO26262.
He has been working for so many ISO 26262 project since 2007.
>> Correct
this seminar is a big chance to learn about the ISO26262 technology and I am sure that it helps to proceed our future project.
>> This seminar is a big chance for us to learn the ISO 26262 technology and I\'m sure this will help us to proceed with our future project.
Let me introduce Mr. [Name].
>> Correct
Mr. [Name], please come to in front of the desk....(Please come to here near the mic.)...
>> Correct
>> OR: Please come forward, Mr. [Name].
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