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2017-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 Nova

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(I am a moderator for a meeting. and i have to introduce a presenter who is very important person in our project. our team have to learn a latest technology from him. I will introduce him now. I will write a article to introduce him to everyone before starting his presentation. Please correct grammer slips and suggest more good expression in this situation. ) hello everyone. Today I will introduce him who is a senior software engineer in the business unit achitectur team from London site of our company. he is a specialist of building software achitecture complying with ISO26262. and He has been working for so many ISO26262 project since 2007. this seminar is a big chance to learn about the ISO26262 technology and I am sure that it helps to proceed our future project. Let me introduce Mr. [Name]. Mr. [Name], please come to in front of the desk....(Please come to here near the mic.)...

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Hello HyundSuk! Always remember to capitalize the first letter in a sentence. You can also add the other accomlishments of your speaker aside from being a se\\pecialist in his feild.   I am a moderator for a meeting. and i have to introduce a presenter who is very important person in our project. >> I am a moderator in a meeting and I have to introduce a presenter who is very important in our project.   our team have to learn a latest technology from him. >> Our team has to learn the latest technology from him. I will introduce him now. >> Correct >> OR: I am going to intoduce him now.I will write a article to introduce him to everyone before starting his presentation. >> I will write an article to introduce him to everyone before starting with his presentation. hello everyone. >> Hello, everyone! Today I will introduce him who is a senior software engineer in the business unit achitectur team from London site of our company. >> Today, I will introduce our speker who is a senior software engineer in the business unit architechture team from London.   he is a specialist of building software achitecture complying with ISO26262. and >> He is a specialist in building software architechture complying with ISO26262.   He has been working for so many ISO 26262 project since 2007. >> Correct   this seminar is a big chance to learn about the ISO26262 technology and I am sure that it helps to proceed our future project. >> This seminar is a big chance for us to learn the ISO 26262 technology and I\'m sure this will help us to proceed with our future project. Let me introduce Mr. [Name]. >> Correct Mr. [Name], please come to in front of the desk....(Please come to here near the mic.)... >> Correct >> OR: Please come forward, Mr. [Name].  

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