Holes

2012-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

Today was a normal day. So I stayed home and read a book called "Holes". It was about about an unlucky boy named Stanley Yelnats. The funny thing about this family was that his father, his grand father, and his great grand father was named Stanley Yelnats because if you write the name backwards, its still Stanley Yelnats. Well, Stanley was walking down a bloak when a pair of shoe fell down from a sky. His father was actually a inventor, so Stanley decided to take them to his father. He was so excited, he started to run. Soon the police saw him running with a pair of sneakers. The sneaker belonged to a famous baseball player. Stanley tried telling the police that it fell from the sky, but they didn't believe him. Instead he was to go to jail or to Camp Green Lake, where bad boys train to build their character. I don't really believe in' lucks', but I think this boy is very unlucky.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], Well yeah, some days are normal days so we would treat some days special kk^^ I guess the book is awesome to read, you\'d surely learn about how Stanley changes his character in the camp^^ Enjoy your day by making it productive! T\' Joan^^ Today was a normal day. >> CORRECT!So I stayed home and read a book called \"Holes\". >> So, I stayed home and read a book called \"Holes\".It was about about an unlucky boy named Stanley Yelnats. >> It was aboutan unlucky boy named Stanley Yelnats.The funny thing about this family was that his father, his grand father, and his great grand father was named Stanley Yelnats because if you write the name backwards, its still Stanley Yelnats. >> The funny thing about this family was that his father, his grand father, and his great grand father was named Stanley Yelnats because if you write the name backwards, it\'s still Stanley Yelnats.Well, Stanley was walking down a bloak when a pair of shoe fell down from a sky. >> Well, Stanley was walking down a block when a pair of shoes fell down from the sky.His father was actually a inventor, so Stanley decided to take them to his father. >> His father was actually an inventor, so Stanley decided to take them to his father.He was so excited, he started to run. >> CORRECT!Soon the police saw him running with a pair of sneakers. >> CORRECT!The sneaker belonged to a famous baseball player. >>The sneakers belonged to a famous baseball player.Stanley tried telling the police that it fell from the sky, but they didn\'t believe him. >> CORRECT! Instead he was to go to jail or to Camp Green Lake, where bad boys train to build their character. >> CORRECT!I don\'t really believe in\' lucks\', but I think this boy is very unlucky. >> CORRECT!

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