holiday

2020-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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Chuseok has become a little easier since a few years ago. That is why this holiday was a little long, And the government kept promoting the movement to refrain from moving. On the contrary, when families gathered, public transportation and highways were quiet. Usually, families co[이름]g from afar were so hard to get together. It`s been a long time since we got together and our parents liked it so much. Especially, my two sons haven`t gotten together since high school. I was also happy with them.

강사 첨삭

Hi Mrs. [Name]~ Thank you for doing your homework. I highly appreciate your efforts in doing your homework. Keep up the good work. You are doing great! See you in class. --T.Jasper

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Chuseok has become a little easier since a few years ago.
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That is why this holiday was a little long.
>> CORRECT

And the government kept promoting the movement to refrain from moving.
>> And, the government kept promoting the movement to refrain from going out of our houses.

On the contrary, when families gathered, public transportation and highways were quiet.
>> CORRECT

Usually, families co[이름]g from afar were so hard to get together.
>> CORRECT

It`s been a long time since we got together and our parents liked it so much.
>> CORRECT

Especially, my two sons haven`t gotten together since high school.
>> CORRECT

I was also happy with them.
>> CORRECT

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