holiday

2011-04-26 · 첨삭 강사 Bella

학생이 쓴 원문

From May 4 to 10, I'll have a vacation for 6 days. I postponed the classes during the vacation. I'm supposed to meet my friends from my hometown and go to astronomical observary. I really expect the vacation but I'm sorry that I won't talk with Jessica.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! It is good that you will take your vacation.However,I am sad because you will not be able to talk to me during your vacation.Anyway,I am happy for you.I hope that you would really have a good time on your break time.Take care! -T.Jessica- From May 4 to 10, I'll have a vacation for 6 days. >>Correct >>I will take my vacation for 6 days,from May 4 to 10.I postponed the classes during the vacation. >>CorrectI'm supposed to meet my friends from my hometown and go to astronomical observary. >>CorrectI really expect the vacation but I'm sorry that I won't talk with Jessica. >>I am really awaiting for the vacation so I'm sorry that I won't talk with you Jessica.

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