Holiday

2018-10-02 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

Tommorrow is holiday. And I am going to meet my aunt. October has a lot of holiday. Next tuesday is holiday too. There is a big event about giving fry pan free. So, my thrid aunt said to my mom and my second aunt to go there. Actually my mom note her to go there. And my third aunt was satisfied with the gift. And if my second aunt will stay more I will have a good lunch with my aunt.

강사 첨삭

Tommorrow is holiday.

>> Correct

And I am going to meet my aunt.

>> Correct

October has a lot of holiday.

>> October has a lot of holidays.

Next tuesday is holiday too.

>> Correct

There is a big event about giving fry pan free.

>> There is a big event to give out frying pans for free.

So, my thrid aunt said to my mom and my second aunt to go there.

>> So, my third aunt told my mom and my second aunt to go there.

Actually my mom note her to go there. And my third aunt was satisfied with the gift.

>> Actually, my mom noted her to go there. My third aunt was satisfied with the gift.

And if my second aunt will stay more I will have a good lunch with my aunt.

>> And if my second aunt will stay more, I will have a good lunch with my aunt.

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