holiday
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the holiday is doing nothing
Because I need some time alone after.
There was no time for me.
Raising children, husband`s problem and other events,
which made me very busy.
It`s better to live for myself now.
it`s more tiring to do something on the holidays.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mrs. [Name]. Great job on your homework. Please keep it up. Although, I think you misunderstood the question. I was asking about making a holiday of your own. For example, Mrs. [Name]\'s Day. That means it\'s your day. Anyway, great job on making these sentences. See you later in class. -T. Jasper
I think the holiday is doing nothing
Because I need some time alone after.
There was no time for me.
Raising children, husband`s problem and other events,
It`s better to live for myself now.
it`s more tiring to do something on the holidays.
I think the holiday is doing nothing
Because I need some time alone after.
>> I think the holiday is doing nothing because I need some time alone after.
Raising children, husband`s problem and other events,
which made me very busy.
>> I have no time because I was raising my children, helping with my husband\'s problem and other events. These made me very busy.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
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