holidays
학생이 쓴 원문
We have perceptioanal conflicts in many parts of society between the oldd and the young generation.
Holiday Stress is one of them.
The young generation does not like holidays that they hve to do traditional memoral ceremony.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]!
How do you perceive the young generation then? Are they heartless or less sentimental?
Let me know your thought. See you later :)
Aki~
Aki~
We have perceptional conflicts in many parts of society between the old and the young generation.
>>> CORRECT!
Holiday Stress is one of them.
>>> CORRECT!
The young generation does not like holidays that they hve to do traditional memoral ceremony.
>>> The young generation does not like holidays that they have to do traditional memorial ceremonies.
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