Holidays!
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Hello [이름],
I hope that you can pass the important exam of yours.
It would be a long holiday for both of us and I wish we can spend it wisely.
Have a great time!!!
Thank you for expressing your opinion on you essay!!!
Talk to you son!!!
T. Jeny
There are very long holidays, four holidays!
>>It would be a long four days holiday.
I\'m excited about how I should spend the long holidays.
>>I\'m excited about how I should spend the long holiday.
Of course, I need to finish my tests tommorow first.
>>Of course, I need to finish first my tests tommorow.
>>Of course, I need to finish my tests first.
I\'m a little nervous.
>>correct
I prepared for tommorow\'s test but I worry if I can do well as I did. Oh god...
>>I prepared for tommorow\'s test but I am worried if I can do well.
Anyway, have good holidays, Jeny. :D
>>Anyway, have a good holiday, Jeny.
<Homework>
Educated people need to have a responsibility for improving our life properly.
>>Educated people need to have responsibilities in improving their lives properly.
There are still so many people that don\'t observe life\'s rules, including us.
>>There are still so many people who don\'t observe the life\'s rules, of course including us.
We know how we should behave in society.
>>We should know how to behave in society.
But we often ignore them for our comfortability.
>>But we often ignore it because we are too comfortable with our lives.
If observing them, we could enhance our life quality.
>>If we only observe them, then we could enhance the quality of life we have.
We need to have flexibility as well.
>>We need to be flexible as well.
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