Holidays in Korea.

We have 2 famous holidays in Korea One is Chuseok and another is new year's day. I prefer chuseok day to new year's day. Because I like the weather in fall. In chuseok day, I used to be in my hometown and meet my family. but nowdays I can't Since I work in shift , I usually can't rest on holiday.

Hi [이름]! Thank you for sharing this information about the two famous holidays in Korea. Keep sending more compositions!   We have 2 famous holidays in Korea. >>Correct, but don't forget to put period at the end of the sentence.One is Chuseok and another is new year's day. >>The first one is Chuseok and the other one is New Year's Day.I prefer chuseok day to new year's day. >>I prefer Chuseok Day than New Year's Day.Because I like the weather in fall. >>CorrectIn chuseok day, I used to be in my hometown and meet my family. >>Correct >>In Chuseok Day, I used to be in my hometown and meet my family.but nowdays I can't >>But nowadays, I can'tSince I work in shift , I usually can't rest on holiday. >>Since I work in different shifts. I can't usually take a rest during the holidays.