Holloween
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Theme: [ESSAY] Write about the typical Holloween in your country.
In Korea\'s Holloween, It is just an ordinary day.
Last year, I went to school on Holloween.
It was just an ordinary day. Students and teachers are not wearing custumes or so.
I think in Korea, Holloween is just an ordinary day!
(P.S. But in some kindergardens and English academies, they do some events!)
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Theme: [ESSAY] Write about the typical Halloween in your country.
In Korea\'s Holloween, It is just an ordinary day.
>> Korean Halloween is merely an ordinary day. [Please note the correct spelling of \"Halloween\".]
>> or: On Korea\'s Halloween, it\'s just an ordinary day.
Last year, I went to school on Holloween. It was just an ordinary day.
>> Last year, I went to school on Halloween. It was just a normal day. [Please note the correct spelling of \"Halloween\".]
Students and teachers are not wearing custumes or so.
>> Students and teachers were not wearing costumes or something. [Please note the correct spelling of \"costumes \".]
I think in Korea, Holloween is just an ordinary day!
>> Therefore, I think in Korea, Halloween is just another ordinary day!
(P.S. But in some kindergardens and English academies, they do some events!)
>> (P.S. But in some kindergartens and English academies, they do some events!) [Please note the correct spelling of \"kindergartens\".]
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