Hollywood movies
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1. Of course, I really like watching Hollywood movies and there are several reasons for that.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I definitely like watching Hollywood movies and I have some reasons for it.
2. Actually, when I was young, I don\'t have any concept of movies like which one is Hollywood and which one is not.
>>Actually, when I was young, I didn\'t have any concept of movies like which one was Hollywood and which one was not.
3. But as I grew up, I found that there are many different things between both of them.
>>But as I grew up, I found that there were many different things between the both of them.
4. The first thing I realized was background.
>>The first thing I realized was the background.
5. It means Western culture and ours have so many different things and they give different subjects when directors try to film the movie.
>>It means Western culture has so many different things compared to ours and they give different subjects when directors try to film the movie.
6. So I think it is really intriguing to watch Hollywood movies because I can feel their thoughts, lifestyles and so on.
>>So I think it is really intriguing to watch Hollywood movies because I can perceive their thoughts, lifestyles and so on.
7. Also, for the same incidents, it is possible to accept them in different ways.
>>Also, for the same incident, it is possible to accept them in different ways.
8. For example, Hollywood movies about Korean war or 2nd World War show a different aspect compared to the movie which is made by Korean.
>>For example, Hollywood movies about Korean war or 2nd World War show a different perspective compared to the movies which are made by Koreans
9. So, I think enjoying both of them is the best in many aspects.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Therefore, I get to enjoy both kinds of movies.
Good opinion.
-T. Melody ^^
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