Hollywood movies

2020-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Melody

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Of course, I really like watching Hollywood movies and there are several reasons for that. Actually, when I was young, I don\'t have any concept of movies like which one is Hollywood and which one is not. But as I grew up, I found that there are many different things between both of them. The first thing I realized was background. It means Western culture and ours have so many different things and they give different subjects when directors try to film the movie. So I think it is really intriguing to watch Hollywood movies because I can feel their thoughts, lifestyles and so on. Also, for the same incidents, it is possible to accept them in different ways. For example, Hollywood movies about Korean war or 2nd World War show a different aspect compared to the movie which is made by Korean. So, I think enjoying both of them is the best in many aspects.

강사 첨삭


1. Of course, I really like watching Hollywood movies and there are several reasons for that.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I definitely like watching Hollywood movies and I have some reasons for it.


2. Actually, when I was young, I don\'t have any concept of movies like which one is Hollywood and which one is not.

>>Actually, when I was young, I didn\'t have any concept of movies like which one was Hollywood and which one was not.


3. But as I grew up, I found that there are many different things between both of them.

>>But as I grew up, I found that there were many different things between the both of them.


4. The first thing I realized was background.

>>The first thing I realized was the background.


5. It means Western culture and ours have so many different things and they give different subjects when directors try to film the movie.

>>It means Western culture has so many different things compared to ours and they give different subjects when directors try to film the movie.


6. So I think it is really intriguing to watch Hollywood movies because I can feel their thoughts, lifestyles and so on.

>>So I think it is really intriguing to watch Hollywood movies because I can perceive their thoughts, lifestyles and so on.


7. Also, for the same incidents, it is possible to accept them in different ways.

>>Also, for the same incident, it is possible to accept them in different ways.


8. For example, Hollywood movies about Korean war or 2nd World War show a different aspect compared to the movie which is made by Korean.

>>For example, Hollywood movies about Korean war or 2nd World War show a different perspective compared to the movies which are made by Koreans


9. So, I think enjoying both of them is the best in many aspects.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Therefore, I get to enjoy both kinds of movies.


Good opinion.

-T. Melody ^^

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