Holy cow!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Yesterday, I went to Hanriver with my dad.
We were so surprised because, there were full of water on bicycle rode!!
I have never seen this situation before in my whole life.
I couldn't even see the road.
According to my dad, he said that when I was born it happened more terrible.
I was really sad about it, however I had more fun than usual.
I road my bike on the water.
I felt I was driving a boat for sightseeing Hanriver.
More amazing thing was that my dad found a fish.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]! I guess you had a really high tide there. Nice composition, I'll talk to you tomorrow. -Teacher JM
Yesterday, I went to Hanriver with my dad.
>>>CorrectWe were so surprised because, there were full of water on bicycle rode!!
>>>We were so surprised because the bicycle road was full of water!!I have never seen this situation before in my whole life.
>>>CorrectI couldn't even see the road.>>>Correct
According to my dad, he said that when I was born it happened more terrible.
>>>According to my dad, when I was born, something like that already happened in a more terrible way. I was really sad about it, however I had more fun than usual.
>>>CorrectI road my bike on the water.
>>>CorrectI felt I was driving a boat for sightseeing Hanriver.
>>>I felt I was driving a boat to sightsee Hanriver.More amazing thing was that my dad found a fish.
>>>The more amazing thing was that my dad found a fish.
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