Holy cow!!

2010-09-14 · 첨삭 강사 janel

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Yesterday, I went to Hanriver with my dad. We were so surprised because, there were full of water on bicycle rode!! I have never seen this situation before in my whole life. I couldn't even see the road. According to my dad, he said that when I was born it happened more terrible. I was really sad about it, however I had more fun than usual. I road my bike on the water. I felt I was driving a boat for sightseeing Hanriver. More amazing thing was that my dad found a fish.

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Hi there [이름]! I guess you had a really high tide there. Nice composition, I'll talk to you tomorrow. -Teacher JM   Yesterday, I went to Hanriver with my dad. >>>CorrectWe were so surprised because, there were full of water on bicycle rode!! >>>We were so surprised because the bicycle road was full of water!!I have never seen this situation before in my whole life. >>>CorrectI couldn't even see the road.>>>Correct According to my dad, he said that when I was born it happened more terrible. >>>According to my dad, when I was born, something like that already happened in a more terrible way. I was really sad about it, however I had more fun than usual. >>>CorrectI road my bike on the water. >>>CorrectI felt I was driving a boat for sightseeing Hanriver. >>>I felt I was driving a boat to sightsee Hanriver.More amazing thing was that my dad found a fish. >>>The more amazing thing was that my dad found a fish.

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