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I think that beneficial for people are Smartphone. Old cell phone has just phone function. At that time we can just call, and then SMS function was added. Cell phone is developing more and more, and nowadays cell phone was changed to Smartphone. SMS and call function has been very basic function. All people access internet and use smartphone for banking account. In addition, people can use a lot of application like camera, wallet, navigation and so on. On the other contrary, smartphone has bad things. A lot of people addicted to games and rise to less conversation. Anyway, Smartphone gives a lot of convenience to people and help to find much information

Hi Jason! ^^ Good work in your essay but you forgot to mention the topic. ^^ So, I added that to the correction in the part where smartphones can have negative effects. Good job though in comparing and contrasting the good and the bad of using smartphones. ^^ Have a happy weekend Jason. ^^   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   I think that beneficial for people are Smartphone. >> I think smartphones are beneficial for people.Old cell phone has just phone function. At that time we can just call, and then SMS function was added. >> Outdated cellphones could just make calls back then however, as time passed, the SMS function was added.Cell phone is developing more and more, and nowadays cell phone was changed to Smartphone.>> Cellphone have been developing more and more and nowadays, the cellphone has evolved to the smartphone. SMS and call function has been very basic function. All people access internet and use smartphone for banking account. In addition, people can use a lot of application like camera, wallet, navigation and so on. >> Sending SMS and making calls are now only the basic functions because people can now access the internet, take pictures, manage their personal accounts, use GPS to mention a few using their phones.On the other contrary, smartphone has bad things. >> On the contrary, smartphones do have bad features.A lot of people addicted to games and rise to less conversation. >> A lot of people get addicted to the applications installed on their phones that hinder making decent conversation and socialization making communication less personal between people.Anyway, Smartphone gives a lot of convenience to people and help to find much information >> However, weighing the pros and cons of the use of smartphone, these gadgets give convenience and access to information for a lot of people.