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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~good morning teacher~!!
How are you today?
Do you have special plan last weekend ?
I met a school alumni meet by chance (in bar.)
They met in a long time. i was very fun.
also I drank too much alcohol.
very fun but I was suffered from a hangover.
today homework..I was forgot I'm so sorry.
but!! I have a gift for you. There are secret of diet.
I had a lot of trouble. I don't know ..you can understand.
because my English skills are low.
and I have a trouble.
I can't find your e-mail address anywhere..
Even in your profile.
what's your e-mail address??
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!! Thank you for your composition. You are doing great with your English skills!^_^ I provided you some corrections. Please find time to review it. ^^
You can just email me at [이메일] or you can send a message to me using our website.^_^
See you in class later. Take care!^_^\\
__Teacher Nica__
Hi~good morning teacher~!!
>> Correct!How are you today?
>> Correct!Do you have special plan last weekend ?
>> Did you had any special plans last weekend?I met a school alumni meet by chance (in bar.)
>> I met a school alumni by chance at a bar.They met in a long time.
>> We haven\'t seen each other for a long time.
i was very fun.
>> It was fun.also I drank too much alcohol.
>> I also drunk too much alcohol.very fun but I was suffered from a hangover.
>> It ws fun but I suffered from a hangover.today homework..I was forgot I\'m so sorry.
>> Today, I forgot to do my homework. I\'m sorry.but!! I have a gift for you.
>> But I have a gift for you.
There are secret of diet.
>> The secrets of diet.I had a lot of trouble.
>> I have a lot of problem.
I don\'t know ..you can understand. because my English skills are low.>> I don\'t know if you can understand it because my English skills are low.and I have a trouble.
>> And I have a problem.I can\'t find your e-mail address anywhere..
>> Correct!Even in your profile.>> Correct!what\'s your e-mail address??
>> Correct!
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