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2012-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 Nica

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Hi~good morning teacher~!! How are you today? Do you have special plan last weekend ? I met a school alumni meet by chance (in bar.) They met in a long time. i was very fun. also I drank too much alcohol. very fun but I was suffered from a hangover. today homework..I was forgot I'm so sorry. but!! I have a gift for you. There are secret of diet. I had a lot of trouble. I don't know ..you can understand. because my English skills are low. and I have a trouble. I can't find your e-mail address anywhere.. Even in your profile. what's your e-mail address??

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Hi [이름]!! Thank you for your composition. You are doing great with your English skills!^_^ I provided you some corrections. Please find time to review it. ^^ You can just email me at [이메일] or you can send a message to me using our website.^_^ See you in class later. Take care!^_^\\ __Teacher Nica__   Hi~good morning teacher~!! >> Correct!How are you today? >> Correct!Do you have special plan last weekend ? >> Did you had any special plans last weekend?I met a school alumni meet by chance (in bar.) >> I met a school alumni by chance at a bar.They met in a long time. >> We haven\'t seen each other for a long time. i was very fun. >> It was fun.also I drank too much alcohol. >> I also drunk too much alcohol.very fun but I was suffered from a hangover. >> It ws fun but I suffered from a hangover.today homework..I was forgot I\'m so sorry. >> Today, I forgot to do my homework. I\'m sorry.but!! I have a gift for you. >> But I have a gift for you. There are secret of diet. >> The secrets of diet.I had a lot of trouble. >> I have a lot of problem. I don\'t know ..you can understand. because my English skills are low.>> I don\'t know if you can understand it because my English skills are low.and I have a trouble. >> And I have a problem.I can\'t find your e-mail address anywhere.. >> Correct!Even in your profile.>> Correct!what\'s your e-mail address?? >> Correct!

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